(Helmer instantly forgave Nora for her mistakes and took the blame for it )
Helmer " I forgive you , I forgive you my love " Helmer said desperately.
Nora " NO! NO! NO! . How can you forgive me . I did something horrible . you should neglect me " Nora said with a sad look on her face ...
Helmer grabs Nora and says "But you did it to save my life and if it wasn't for you ... I wouldn't be here "
Nora : " I must leave you " nora said confidently ... " I can't do this to you and the children . They don't deserve a mother like me "
Helmer " please Nora don't leave me and the Children . We need you " .Helmer says desperately . How are you going to survive out there ? you don't know anything about this world " Helmer said sarcastically..
Nora " I must go Helmer , I am not the wife for you " Nora says while packing her clothes "
Helmer to be honest I'm not happy with this life . For Seven years you treated me like a child and do you really think I'm that stupid ? ...Nora says sharply .. I might not know everything about the world but I'm willing to educate myself " .
Helmer '' How can say such a thing '' Helmer says loudly .
Nora " watch your tone . I'm no longer your wife . I DO NOT LOVE YOU ANYMORE " Nora says fiercely. " I love Dr.Rank . He was the only one that ever understood me and actually cared about me and didn't treat me like a child "
* Meanwhile *
( The doorbell rings ... the maid comes in and opens the door )
Maid " Hello Dr.Rank your back ?!?"
Dr.Rank " Im here to see Nora and Helmer "
(Dr.Rank walks in ... The maid closes the door . He blunder to the kitchen where he hears Nora and Helmer talking, but he stay hidden... )
( Helmer raises his hand to hit nora , suddenly a hand suppresses Helmer from hitting nora )
Dr.Rank " Don't you dare touch her again you're incompetent coward "
Helmer " how dare you come into my house and disturb my privacy "
Dr.Rank " I came to say one last good bye to Nora and to tell her that I will always love her "
Nora " oh Rank take me with you I'm sure i can learn many things from you "
Helmer " No Nora no please forgive me .. you must forgive me "
Dr.Rank " I believe in the capricious nature of fate.. Nora and I are meant to be . " Dr.Rank says happily ..
( Nora looks at Helrmer and says .... )
Nora " I forgive you but that doesn't mean I'm staying. One last thing Helmer ..I did everything to save your life and i know I made wrong decisions on the long run . I should've told you the truth from the beginning but what is done is done, so now is time to move on . I capable of many things Helmer . Never underestimate a woman .... Now I must go before the children wake up .. good bye "
( Helmer is speechless by Noras action .. so he just stand there crying While Nora and Dr.Rank walk out the door ... )
THE END
i love the way you ended you story. but I agree on how you ended it
ReplyDeleteLuciana you did a really good job with alternate ending and I really like the way that you ended it. Nora finally put her foot done and stood up for herself for a chance. I think that Rank and Nora were meant to be a couple and could have been married to one another and Rank wouldn't have a problem with showing his love for his wife unlike Torvald.
ReplyDeleteZahria al-shanae jake and Kendra
ReplyDeleteThis ending was enjoyable. Especially when Dr. Rank stood up to admit he loved Nora and that he wasn't afraid to confess it in front of Helmer. Also how Nora took action and confessed her love for him too.
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